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Just A Little Bit Better... by ~LyttleBlankyta:iconLyttleBlankyta:



Wide eyed and waking to this world,
My hands are shaking. And for once,
I can be sure that I’m not breaking. For once,
I can be sure that you’re not faking.
And for the life of me I can’t recall what made me want to leave it all, what made you want to talk it all away?
And what, in God’s Name, makes you want to stay?

Open hearts and you don't seem to mind
That I’m imperfect. And for once,
I can expect it. And for once,
I can believe that I am worth it.
And I don't suppose you’ll stay a while; I think that I could use a smile, cause somehow you can make these miles brief.
I never thought that I’d be sighing such relief.

Wide eyed and comprehending.
What I thought was you pretending was just
Your attempt at mending. It was
Only you, defending me.
And my heartbeats drumming for this fear of becoming what I swore that I would never, ever be
Frozen: Looking at you looking right through me.
©2004-2009 ~LyttleBlankyta
:iconlyttleblankyta:

Author's Comments

WHATWHAT!?!?!?!?!?! a poem....by Jade...and its....HAPPY!?!? *GASP* oh yes people, its happy. prepare youre insulin shots, friends.

So this poem is basically dedicated to every single one of my friends, because theyre all amazing enough to put up with me, and make me feel so much better about myself, and STILL put up with me even when i dont feel well about myself. And just...everything you guys do, i love you. all of you. thank you for still being here, even after all the dumb things ive said and done. Also dedicated to derrick, who somehow managed to spark this upward hill. and to everyone who carried me to the top. i love you guys.

And to think, i had it right in front of me, all this time. haha, im a moron.

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TO REPEAT youstupidho
I should have hurled you down that hill while i had the chance >_>
Yea, spiffeh poem, i like the middle stanza bestestz0rz
Er..
YAYJADE?

--
Living is easy with eyes closed,
misunderstanding all you see..
It's getting hard to be someone
but it all works out,
it doesn't matter much to me.

Let Me Take You Down.


:yakuza: Marts :yakuza:
:icondangerouslycheezy:
absolutely amazing...yet again....i love jade

--
<briana>
(aka cheeze, bree, breeface, briefcase, trackie)


-if you blink you could miss so much...please dont ever close your eyes-
:iconirish-dee:
YAY

it makes me happy that somebody out there can rhyme in poems and NOT make it sound silly

--
by a lonely prison wall
i heard a young girl calling
michael they have takin' u away
for you stole trevlyn's corn
so the young might see the morn
now a prison ship lies waiting in the bay
:iconalonemirage:
Will you marry me?

The rhyme sceme is different, but I LOVE it.

--
Don't wander through this glassy surface,
Expectin' to find more than me,
'Cause what am I without a purpose,
But a lone mirage to see?
:iconanewfireeachday:
isnt happy better than sad? i told you you could be...as amazing as you are, as this is...bravo love, bravo- it deff warms the soul

--
"Put passion to this pen, in hopes of something beautiful, but there's nothing pure that ever could or ever would come of this"
{d.g.w.}
~
"Take this pen to paper,
like a virgin enthralled by the danger.
Poetry was never this real to me..."
{s.a.
:icong2k3:
Actions go farther then words

--
Semper Fi
:icondontcomecloser:
arg jade your a genius :blowkiss:

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